Not Another Love Poem
The greeks in chorus
as only greeks can murmur,
view love as human folly
to be cured with geometry and humor
with forensic specificity
and pathagorian wit
the malady dissected with terms
a surgeons fancy fits
Eros, agape, filios, storage,
epithumia and phile
clean as pie charts,
filed and stored
by generations ignored
in error, pain and shame
we talk of love
and worship love
profit from love
and flee from love
Poets extol its danger
priests vow its virtue
lovers pine and die
in its presence or absence
like a lawn unmowed,
it thrives
ignored like a ringing phone
it grows
unencumbered by god-bothering zealots
love becomes vast and encompassing
surrounding us with quiet glee
it wiggles inside us
with the terrifying patience
of an ancient, thirsty deity
for the unwary
the lame of gait
crooked of tooth
less than clean
And transforms us into saints.
January 13, 2011 at 3:12 pm
agree! thanks for sharing! here’s mine for this thursday.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/19/the-tears/
January 13, 2011 at 7:53 pm
sweet
thanks
January 14, 2011 at 12:15 am
So beautiful! Love conquers all.
Here’s mine fot this Thursday: http://rhymemeasmile.blogspot.com/2011/01/craving-crow-gossip.html
January 14, 2011 at 4:31 pm
amazing reflections and interpretations on love.
well put.
January 14, 2011 at 4:31 pm
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February 11, 2011 at 12:16 pm
for Valentine’s day
I keep my heart in a cage of bones
ringed by a moat,
stalked by death.
Fins scythe, like a dirge in skin,
thru thin water.
In a land where only mad dogs
answer selfish prayers
January 14, 2011 at 11:20 pm
rhymeasmile, loved “gossip Queens”
January 16, 2011 at 6:49 pm
Excellent poem! I love the use of connotation, linguistic style, and overall content and statement. Truly, a beautifully wrought poem!
Blessings,
Marissa
January 17, 2011 at 2:28 pm
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January 17, 2011 at 9:53 pm
see Julie! I told you that your poem RAWK! Now we have these wonderful people out there in cyberspace in complete agreement. So there!
January 18, 2011 at 12:58 pm
There is not a line in this poem that I do not adore. Thank you for sharing this poem.
January 18, 2011 at 3:16 pm
notatamelion, would you change us to them in the last line?